Tuesday, April 17, 2018

Third Revisions

While presenting our second film submission to our class we were made clear that there was no clear protagonist.  This made the film harder to follow and led to confusion among our peers. To fix this, we re-filmed to add more dialogue in order to help make the story clearer. Adding even just a little bit of dialogue will quickly clear the confusion and make the plot easier to follow. These are our last revisions before submitting our final film which will be easy to follow when being watched.

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